On tuesday in the morning we sat in the class waiting
for the people who are coming late. Then everyone was
their then the bell rang the we went outside then we saw
parent was their then our teacher told us to sit down on
the ground then she told us who we are going with then
she called me and said that's im
for the people who are coming late. Then everyone was
their then the bell rang the we went outside then we saw
parent was their then our teacher told us to sit down on
the ground then she told us who we are going with then
she called me and said that's im
Going with nasili mum then we went to his car then we
couldn't fit in the car then there was another car that
had twos sit for me and elijah then we got in the car.
couldn't fit in the car then there was another car that
had twos sit for me and elijah then we got in the car.
After that we was their first then aisakes dad got of then
he went to this lady and then the lady told him thats we have to go on the other side because we was at the other
side. Then we went to the other side then we got their
then they told their name to us and one name was call
justin and danika and steven then they said we have to
go in two groups my partner was Tupua me and Tupua
did not have a sailing boat at first so we rode on a speed
boat with 1 of the sailing instructors Steven. Then when
we found a sailing boat me and tupua got off the speed
boat because it was Francis and Monique’s turn to ride
on the speed boat then when we were on the sailing boat
I was the on that pulled the pads and Tupua was the one
that pull the sail string and it was so fun and then
something happen me and Tupua was full of water
then we call steven then he came with the bottle to
full the water in their then there was no water then we
said thank
he went to this lady and then the lady told him thats we have to go on the other side because we was at the other
side. Then we went to the other side then we got their
then they told their name to us and one name was call
justin and danika and steven then they said we have to
go in two groups my partner was Tupua me and Tupua
did not have a sailing boat at first so we rode on a speed
boat with 1 of the sailing instructors Steven. Then when
we found a sailing boat me and tupua got off the speed
boat because it was Francis and Monique’s turn to ride
on the speed boat then when we were on the sailing boat
I was the on that pulled the pads and Tupua was the one
that pull the sail string and it was so fun and then
something happen me and Tupua was full of water
then we call steven then he came with the bottle to
full the water in their then there was no water then we
said thank
You After that me and Tupua then we got there was balls
they're in the water and it was time to go for lunch
then we went back then we went to eat then we went
to get in the the boot then we came back then it was
time to go then we went to
To get ready. Then we came and sat down then Justinthey're in the water and it was time to go for lunch
then we went back then we went to eat then we went
to get in the the boot then we came back then it was
time to go then we went to
And
Steven and Danika was their then they call our name and
they gives us a Sticker then we went back to school.
After thats we went back home.
they gives us a Sticker then we went back to school.
After thats we went back home.
KIA ORA my name is Paige as you can see, I read through your blog and I think it is so cool that you went on a sailing trip. I think you could read over and check on punctuation. I don't want to make you sad or anything, I just wanted to say this shines because you're an amazing writer, you write descriptive and I cant describe how amazing it is, Well done!👍
ReplyDeleteaw thanks for telling me Paige
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