On Saturday, me and my family woke up to clean and to go ready to go skating
We got and the skating opens at 2.00, and we went to check but it was busy and. My sisters came to our house with her boyfriend and then they were about to come to skating but we told them it was pack. Then my sister said there is a place called Extreme and they said it is in Botany and then we went there and then we got there and we got off everyone was ready then we went inside. We went in there then we wait to give the money. And then we give the money to them then they give us a card then we went play. And then we had heaps of time to play.
KIA ORA, That is so nice that you and your family go skating.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your peace of writing.
Don't mean to be affensive or hurt your feelings but your title needs some capital letters.
I also could'nt read the writing properly because it wasn't kept together.
Anyway I have been dying to say this Well done!