Life on Mars.

Quick write Term three,

Life on mars. 

So there's a story in 1907 there was this place called life on Mars  and a boy and a girl was planning to make a house and it was in the hole and also there was a big door and the window was so big and the boy and girl brag there cloths and also they started  doing their house.the next day they were still doing and they did the window and then the next day it wasn’t Finnish after that they were finished and also there was a poor man who was crying and the boy and girl went to see if he is okay and he said he was poor and then the girl and boy said you can live with me  and he said thank you the man said. After that they made some food after that they lived happily after. The end.   

What i think ………………

What i think is that the story is abit pretty good and I like the story because it does cool things and yeah. Done.